The dad’s bubble in panel three strikes me as odd. Can’t quite put my finger on it.
Truth be told, this comic is two scripts kinda mashed into one. That’s probably why you are getting that feeling.
I really like this comic better in b/w. I just love the look of your pencils.
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The dad’s bubble in panel three strikes me as odd. Can’t quite put my finger on it.
Truth be told, this comic is two scripts kinda mashed into one. That’s probably why you are getting that feeling.
I really like this comic better in b/w. I just love the look of your pencils.