O_o) Colors!!! My brain is confused.
The blur on panel 1 is kind of neat, but I feel like the focus is on the wrong thing. Riley’s foot is in sharp focus, but Brev is doing something much more interesting in the panel, so my eyes are drawn to all his blurried glory. Maybe swap the focus, there?
On the other hand, I didn’t even notice the blur in panel 3 the first time through the page, so that one worked much better for me, although now I wonder why the same effect wasn’t applied to 6 and 7.
The color explanation is coming…Just haven’t finished the write up yet.
The blur on panel one is correct though for it’s panel view. Granted I could have done a different angle, but the way the frame played out in my mind was Riley is just stepping into view, so in that case your eyes would focus on the newest object because it would remain in your view for longer than a second.
Hmm… everything is fine? He hasn’t just accidentally triggered a time jump or something, then?
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