No, Brevard, no! You’re changing the timeline!!! Now Riley’s going to die again!!! … or something. I’m curious where this is all going.
On the artistic side, I see you’ve decided (?) to lean towards efficiency and stick with the penciling, which works fine. You have a good range of shades, so it’s still clear, but maybe go with a middle ground time-wise and spend a little longer with the pencil shading? It really gives it a nice pop when you take your time with the hair.
… oh, and I have to ask, do you mind me rambling critiques? I just kind of started doing it mindlessly, but I don’t want to get annoying with them or anything…
Brevard.. You gotta love him XD
Can’t wait for what’s next!
… come to think of it, how DOES a guy go INTO THE PAST, after watching all those Back to the Future movies, and think to himself, “Cute girl! I’m-a gonna muck about!!!”?
Emuchu: haha it’s fine..I love getting feedback! As for the the penciling I have to admit that i’m kinda torn. I’m considering trying one more technique or just trying to suck it up and go back to full color updates. I could stick with b&w, but there is something about color that keeps trying to pull me back. Guess i’ll figure it out soon enough.
^-^) Well, you’re allowed to experiment all you want! After all, you’re changing so frequently that we’re not really “used” to any style, yet, so you should take this window of opportunity to figure yourself out.
Nice comic so far… Artwork is clear, and despite the most recent strips not being in colour, your designs for the characters are distinct enough that we don’t have the problem I have with another comic [I’m looking at you, Megatokyo] in telling between different characters.
Uh… Okay, that took ages to type for some reason. Shortened form: You draw good.
I like where this comic’s going, but I’m noting we’ve only travelled in time… In the same universe. Presumably they change something in this past in order to be shifted into another timeline, and thus another universe?
I’ll try my best not to guess what’s coming up though, it’s better if I read and enjoy the present…
Hopefully you’ll last many a moon, as we seem to be reaching the end of many webcomics these days… A lot of artists and scripters are burning out very quickly… So keep at it! 😀
Hey positive feedback loops are always good, provided you stack the deck to make sure the outcomes are beneficial *looks at the shinanegans involved in Chono Trigger and the Jerky Moonstone
Haha so I was wrong
but hey I did say probably not
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